One time in 2008, Amiran came on a Friday starting Easter break to his house in Torreon and heard his dad say something that really surprised him. "Let's go to Cuatrocienegas lake tomorrow Amiran," his dad tells him. Amiran became really excited and agreed to go. The trip was about 3 hours long and Amiran was really happy when he got there but when he saw the place he became dissapointed.
It was pretty and people were bathing and having fun, it all looked joyful but there were rocks in the water everywhere. Amiran wasn't dissapointed as much for the rocks as he was for the fact that his parents didn't let him go swim because of the life-taking rocks, which he considered ridiculous. At one point, when his parents weren't watching he went running to the lake but the sand around was as slippery as ice. He fell and cut his toe, which had an imprtant artery so they had to get him healed by sewing the injury. When he got to the doctor, the hospital was so terrible, they didn't even have anesthesy, so he suffered torture being sewed without anesthesy.
Once the suffering finished, Amiran was crying hard and his parents decided to go back home to Torreon, where he lied down many days because walking with that injury was more painful than walking over hot charcoal. That experience teached him to obey his parents when they warn him about danger and he also learned that he should always to watch his step. He hated Cuatrocienegas a lot ever since that day and will hate it forever.
procura tener mas condado a la otra, buena redacción, me gusto la historia, podrías incluir mas detalles (descripcion)
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